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Please don’t let him bring you down
I don’t want to watch you waste away
I wish I could run to your arms
And promise you a better day

I want you to surrender
The awful games you play
Just for once in your life
I wish you’d ask me to stay

I watch you from my window
As you give into his demand
I know you just want to be “cool”
And you think I don’t understand

But as the days fly past
And I wait for your call
I start to think you don’t care
Because I’m nothing at all

Then I get depressed
And slowly wither away
I can think of nothing else
Except that one day

When you told me I was yours
And you loved me true
Now I look in the mirror
And know I’m nothing to you
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~SunshineDustInc Jan 11, 2013  Student Filmographer
i go on sad ventures when im depressed. this is a good one
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:iconhadesthegod666:
i feel this way know all my xs sead they love me so i spill my heart to them and i get shit like this
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:iconjuliamcelhaney:
Wow just wow...
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~SoulEaterXMaka Nov 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this explains a lot of what i used to go through. i could care less now... good poem
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:iconokamidreams:
It explains exactly what I feel right now...

We used to be so good together... Right before I asked if we had something going on between us.. Then he said: I don't know if I want to... Can we talk about this later?

All day this have been rewinding in my head.. I can't take it..

This work is amazing ;) Keep up the good work;)
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:iconkar-kar93:
Beautiful poem, it's really touching. Keep up the amazing work!
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!tutifruti41 Aug 6, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so like my friend! She falls inlove every two months and then she's confused, then she's over it, then she says "It was nothing between us! It was a faze, I'm over silly crushes! I'm inlove." The same routine for years. This is what one of her future ex-boyfriends will think (he'll be wrong). Also I'm worried about her - she get's involved with older guys and one day things wont end good.

I like ur poem a lot
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:iconhappy5gay8bunny:
ths is so SAD!!! ime crying right now because its just like the situation i am in now!!! :iconsadplz: :iconsadplz: my bf wont vall me back ad i think hes cheting on me!! :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(::(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:((:(:(:(:(:(:((:((:( :iconsadplz: :iconsadplz: its a beutifulpoem though
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~nightroad666 May 21, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
awesome...and i could relate to it...
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